Priceless. (First Poem!)

The first ever piece of poetry I've attempted, looking for constructive feedback as I go forward!

 Bring me your pain, my love.

Spread it out before me.

Unfurl your edges delicately,

Like a fine tapestry.

I'll pour over every stitch,

trace every seam.

I'll hang you in my heart,

The masterpiece I've sought

From the start.

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